Tuesday, January 19, 2010

...more sequencing

Here is a revised version of the "TYI" short. I added two new panels to it...which adds another page to the issue. Let me know what you think.

...and here are the panels outside the story.
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2 comments:

Jeffrey Owens said...

Wow. Those two panels made all the difference in the world.

January 20, 2010 at 12:02 AM
thedave said...

...yeah, i think so too. The "wow" reaction before the reveal at the end really works for me.

January 20, 2010 at 12:59 AM

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